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Why We're Not Even Slightly Interested — Issues With My Name — The Tail — Kneading — Questions — Instincts — Small Moving Things Outside the Window
This is a high-resolution version of an original cartoon made with Blender, the free 3d software. I'd appreciate any feedback as this is my first cartoon. Please post honest critiques. I'm eager to learn and improve with my next cartoon.
I'm also posting a video called "Additional Early Material." This is actually just the first part of the cartoon. Since the first part starts slowly, I thought I might get more people to watch and offer critiques if they could jump right into the cartoon. Maybe I just need to cut the beginning opening material.
What do you think. In this age of micro-limited attention spans, should this be even more mercilessly cut?
Also, what do you think of the voice performances? Do they work? Is the cat's voice intelligible? Is it effective? Would it work better if it were more naturalistic and less exagerated?
Is the animation effective? Do any obvious problems jump out at you? I've been working in a bit of a vacuum, so fresh eyes and ears are really helpful now.
Honestly, it won't hurt my feelings. I'm a big boy! :>)
Thanks for watching.
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